Line Edits Have Landed

Yesterday morning, in fact! So I've been knuckling down addressing my agent's comments and suggestions. Luckily she loved the proposal and it's more a question of tightening up sections and paying closer attention to clarity. This is something my CPs are always pointing out to me as I do tend to forget not everyone is currently living in my own world and things do need to be explained!!

My aim is to get these all finished and back to her within the next day or so and then we'll be on track to send the partial to Berkley!